Saturday, September 14, 2013

Storybook Practice Drawings

My assignment was to draw/sketch five different characters.  I'm not really proud of any of  these, but I had a choice.  Draw what came to mind or sit around waiting for something brilliant (a.k.a. not drawing at all).   Perhaps a detail from one of these will push me in the direction to something better.
Bee Alligator:
What's good:  I like the flowers.
What's bad:  I don't like anything else.
Butterfly with Mangled Wings:
What's good:  I like his expression.
What's bad:  Too depressing for a children's book.
Cat and Dog:
What's good:  I like their personalities- you can tell they're up to something.
What's bad:  Cat and dog?  Like that hasn't been done a zillion times before...  Also I don't like how the background is washed out.  I would have made it more colorful, but feared it would be distracting.  I wish there was a book called "How to make engaging cartoon backgrounds that don't 'fight' with what's in the foreground."
Dragon in Dungeon Nailed to the Wall.
What's good:  I like the frowny face window.  Also the character seems sympathetic.
What's bad:  Too warped and depressing for a children's book.
Weasel and Basilisk
What's good:  I "painted" them with a texture of a pear my friend posted on facebook.  I think it makes the sketch more interesting.
What's bad:  Background is too sparse!  I wanted to add more detail, but didn't know how to do so without  interfering with the foreground.  I also should have left out upper joint on Basilisk leg.  And why doesn't he have eyebrows?

7 comments:

CodeFarmer said...

Hey... maybe an observation?

It seems like the ones of yours you like are also the ones you discard as "too depressing for a children's book". I agree, those are the ones I think are your best.

But don't be so sure they're not appropriate for kids. The illustrated books I remember best from my childhood all had a dark, sad or scary element. The relentless happy-happy diet is not emotionally satisfying, for children just as much as for adults.

Keep up your good work, I think you're on to something.

(Also one day, come back to skydiving.)

Namowal (Jennifer Bourne) said...

Hi CodeFarmer,
Thanks for the observation. I think you have a point about the dark and scary stuff having their role in children's books. I need to remember that.
Thanks again!

Linda Davick said...

I love what you did with this assignment!

Namowal (Jennifer Bourne) said...

Thanks, Linda,
Your timing couldn't be better- I was getting discouraged with my art/writing as of late. Nice to hear some encouragement from a pro. :)

GhostBuild said...

That's shaping up really nicely.

Namowal (Jennifer Bourne) said...

Thanks, Ghostbuild! Nice to hear from you. What're you up to these days?

Mary Pesik said...

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