What's good: I like the flowers.
What's bad: I don't like anything else.
Butterfly with Mangled Wings:
What's good: I like his expression.
What's bad: Too depressing for a children's book.
Cat and Dog:
What's good: I like their personalities- you can tell they're up to something.
What's bad: Cat and dog? Like that hasn't been done a zillion times before... Also I don't like how the background is washed out. I would have made it more colorful, but feared it would be distracting. I wish there was a book called "How to make engaging cartoon backgrounds that don't 'fight' with what's in the foreground."
Dragon in Dungeon Nailed to the Wall.
What's good: I like the frowny face window. Also the character seems sympathetic.
What's bad: Too warped and depressing for a children's book.
Weasel and Basilisk
What's good: I "painted" them with a texture of a pear my friend posted on facebook. I think it makes the sketch more interesting.
What's bad: Background is too sparse! I wanted to add more detail, but didn't know how to do so without interfering with the foreground. I also should have left out upper joint on Basilisk leg. And why doesn't he have eyebrows?
What's good: I "painted" them with a texture of a pear my friend posted on facebook. I think it makes the sketch more interesting.
What's bad: Background is too sparse! I wanted to add more detail, but didn't know how to do so without interfering with the foreground. I also should have left out upper joint on Basilisk leg. And why doesn't he have eyebrows?
8 comments:
Hey... maybe an observation?
It seems like the ones of yours you like are also the ones you discard as "too depressing for a children's book". I agree, those are the ones I think are your best.
But don't be so sure they're not appropriate for kids. The illustrated books I remember best from my childhood all had a dark, sad or scary element. The relentless happy-happy diet is not emotionally satisfying, for children just as much as for adults.
Keep up your good work, I think you're on to something.
(Also one day, come back to skydiving.)
Hi CodeFarmer,
Thanks for the observation. I think you have a point about the dark and scary stuff having their role in children's books. I need to remember that.
Thanks again!
I love what you did with this assignment!
Thanks, Linda,
Your timing couldn't be better- I was getting discouraged with my art/writing as of late. Nice to hear some encouragement from a pro. :)
That's shaping up really nicely.
Thanks, Ghostbuild! Nice to hear from you. What're you up to these days?
Hey! Can these people be friends with Crack Camel? Just asking.
Whimsical.
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