What's good: I like the flowers.
What's bad: I don't like anything else.
Butterfly with Mangled Wings:
What's good: I like his expression.
What's bad: Too depressing for a children's book.
Cat and Dog:
What's good: I like their personalities- you can tell they're up to something.
What's bad: Cat and dog? Like that hasn't been done a zillion times before... Also I don't like how the background is washed out. I would have made it more colorful, but feared it would be distracting. I wish there was a book called "How to make engaging cartoon backgrounds that don't 'fight' with what's in the foreground."
Dragon in Dungeon Nailed to the Wall.
What's good: I like the frowny face window. Also the character seems sympathetic.
What's bad: Too warped and depressing for a children's book.
Weasel and Basilisk
What's good: I "painted" them with a texture of a pear my friend posted on facebook. I think it makes the sketch more interesting.
What's bad: Background is too sparse! I wanted to add more detail, but didn't know how to do so without interfering with the foreground. I also should have left out upper joint on Basilisk leg. And why doesn't he have eyebrows?
What's good: I "painted" them with a texture of a pear my friend posted on facebook. I think it makes the sketch more interesting.
What's bad: Background is too sparse! I wanted to add more detail, but didn't know how to do so without interfering with the foreground. I also should have left out upper joint on Basilisk leg. And why doesn't he have eyebrows?